Frostbite had been walking for ages, she finally stopped hearing the laughter of children, a sound she has never heard of before. She looked closely at them from afar. They wielded wooden bats and had masks covering their eyes. She looked at what looked at what they were hitting it was a deer-like pinata, a look of fear plastered on its face. It appeared to move. The pinata was alive! She took a step closer. One of the children had stopped and pointed at her "doggy!!" the child screamed. All the childeren ran after Frostbite. The child at bat peeled off her mask and followed suit complaining about how this was her worst birthday ever. Frostbite then ditched them in a nearby forest then ran back to the tree the pinata in which the pinata was held captive. She climbed the tree and chewed him down. He luckily landed safely as he could. "are you ok?" she stammered in a shy manner. The pinata didnt reply. Instead he began to limp away. "wait" cried Frostbite. "let me help you" The pinata finally spoke "what help could you do?" He snapped. "just let me try" The pinata rolled his eyes and came up to Frostbite, without saying a word. Frostbite then curled her tail around his injured leg.He looked as though it really bothered him to be touched. When frostbite lifted her tail and his leg was healed this expression was soon replaced with a look of amazement which also quickly vanished and was replaced with annoyance. 'yeah great thanks" He said looking down at the small fox. He then proceeded to walk away the fox trailing behind after a few yards the pinata stopped and turned toward the fox. "do you want something" The pinata demanded. "erm..well I just thought I could travel with you..you see im not used to this neck of the woods and..yeah" "if you cant fend for yourself why should I" The fox replied with silence only a sad sad look with watery eyes. "...fine" The pinata sighed. Frostbite has joined your party! "who said that...." frostbite whispered. The two walked for a while in silence until Frostbite spoke up. "what's your name anyway" "it's Toxic" He stopped and looked around warily. A car was approaching. Toxic kicked Frostbite out of the way and then dove for the sidewalk himself. "Dont distract people who are crossing the road! You're lucky you shut your stupid mouth long enough to hear that car!" Frostbite's ears went back and she fell silent. The two kept walking Frostbite not opening her mouth again. A few days passed and the two became semi-friends. They were on another of their walks in the woods. It was peaceful. The two began to race, they ran faster and faster until Toxic disappeared out of sight. Frostbtie stopped and called out for him. She wondered around until she heard a scream. She ran towards it and found Toxic on the eldge of a cliff the cliff had a small ledge a few inches underneath it which his hooves were set upon and the edge of the cliff beign where his back hooves rest. "frosty ..help me!" She looked at the cliff and ran to Toxic. Shegrabbed a nearby branch and told him to grab on. He went to reach the branch and the shift in weight caused it to crumble. Toxic fell to his demise right before her eyes thigns went blurry then she woke up in a panic. she arose to her feet only to lay back down. It was only a dream. "You know they say dreams are other universes's ways of connecting with you" she remembered her mother saying. She walked off shaking her head smiling. What a crazy fox her mom was.

the end

enjoy the msot cliche story ever written!
  and  like this.
RedRoseRescue
and long
  • December 30, 2014
  • ·
  • Like
RedRoseRescue
if only it was that easy ;P
  • December 30, 2014
  • ·
  • Like
stripes
The story was great. Do you think you can make a second part or something to do with Frostbite?
  • April 6, 2015
  • ·
  • Like
RedRoseRescue
I have already done the second part you may find it on your wall (ps. thanks for the compliment) and by "something to do with frostbtie" what do you mean?
  • April 6, 2015
  • ·
  • Like
stripes
I mean that she is in the story.
  • April 7, 2015
  • ·
  • Like
Captcha Challenge
Reload Image
Type in the verification code above