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i was bored and my teacher made me type a storie i dont think it is good (names that my teacher told me to use) by:Kelsey
Posted On: 10/28/2008 23:00:01

Slyvia was walking through the woods to get away from her family which has been having problems. Walking in the woods she sees a person up a head against a tree crying. She comes a littel closer to visualize that it was a bot about her age but she coluldnt see his face. As i move closer he looks up and holds in the tears that he has i look at him then start to walk away then he says hello, my name is Nathen whats yours? My answer was Slyvia. I walk away farther into the woods but Nathen follows me. I turn around to ask him what he wanted then we both saw the moon it was red like blood dripping from our skin. I run into the cave and he runs after me i reach a dead end and sit in the corner.He sits next to me and can tell that i am terrifide. He hugs me to make me calm down a littel i put my head down. I nerver told you this but he was a handsome boy. He staris out the cave and watches what would happen and as pick up my head there was a red flash and screams all around came. i stand up to go back out but he pulls me back down and i fall into his lap and he says "it is not safe to go out side wait till morning." That night i could bearly sleep and neither could Nathen. Morning finally comes and i walk outside to see what happened and everything was silent and there werent any signs of humans or anything all we could hear were the sounds of animals. At that very moment i knew that it was gonna be a moment in my life that i realize nuttin is worse in the world than this.

That morning when i woke up i went outside and smelled the fresh air and i looked oround just to hear silency i walk back into the cave and look for an old age fire plaace i find 1 and 2 rocks near the fire place. I picked up the 2 rocks and bang them togeter reapidly intill i see a spark i run out side and get some wood and come back in and plce the fire wood and pick up the rocks and start to smash them together again i finally start a fire and sit there feeling the warmth. Nathen wakes up about 5 minutes after i started the fire and sits down next to me. I decide to go outside and fine some food fruit bird eggs or something in my houses. I almost get to my house about 5 minutes away from the village in wich i live i see my family neigbors small children and many other people running out of houses and many people being draged by something i do not reconize. I wait behind a bush and wait to see that no 1 is there. I come out and run down to my houses and go through the back door there was bread, chicken,soup,and some rice on the tabel cooked. i look around and peack around the corner and i turn my head back against the wall i move down to pick up a rock to make the wearwolf leave da bilding i throwit at the other end and out the door it gose hitting the ground with a big BANG. The wearwolf smells ther air I in the other hand stoped breathing and skiped 5 hertbeats. The wearwolf runs out and it runs up the hill looking for the so called person. I grab all the food and i blanket and tie up all of the food in the blanket.i go back through the woods looking to make sure my path was clear i come back to the cave and i run inside and set the food down on the ground. NAthen looks up at me and then at the blanket questioning what was in it. He opens it up and looks at the food and new that it was dangerous 4 me 2 get it. i take out a pice of bread and throw it out side to see if it is posinose and a bird comes down and eats it it stayed there 4 1 hour then left. The food was un harmful.

We injoy some food and save the rest 4 anyother day. I decide to leave the cave and venture out farther beond the woods but i wouldnt go alone. I go into the cave and stit doen looking all bored and Nathen walks out side and into the woods. Slyvia follow and look around then i here Nathen scream. Slyvia runs to find nathen and sees that he is traped by a wear wolf. (not done)



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From: fliryfreckles12
11/29/2008 12:41:32


Cereal_Killer wrote:


Wow the story has a few mistakes i could point out but pretty creative good job


THANKS AND i know there are problems with it



From: Cereal_Killer
11/29/2008 06:23:57

Wow the story has a few mistakes i could point out but pretty creative good job



From: rockout
11/09/2008 11:34:37

awesome




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