ok, i know i havnt been posting scince early last year, but i started doing some other stuff that im thinking about uploading later, but enjoy.

Worlds at war v2

Note- worlds at war v1 has been recreated on account that after reading a few new books, I realized there was an extreme lack of detail in the original, and was over all very void. Instead of going back and rereading the entire thing over again and doing small changes, I’m going to just rewrite the entire story and make it all together better,

Yours truly,

Grand_lord XD

Explanatory: on the planet Krytos there are three sub species of krytosian, feline, fox, and dog, while there are two main species, human and krytosian. Krytosian have a human body structure but the look of an animal. They also are born with unnatural powers.

Part 1

Rich and poor, love and fear

Chapter 1

Kursed

Darkness… that’s all there was… then, I was free floating, blue sky all around me. It was the most pleasing sensation, weightlessness, like a felling of pure joy and nothing else, I never wanted it to stop. But I knew, better than most people, everything good, had to come to an end sometime…

A feeling of wind in my face, I falling sensation, the sky rushing past. A thump and pain… in my face. “You know, there are better ways to wake me up then dumping me out of bed.” I grunted. “Kursed, I already had to use a blow horn,” Said my sister, her blue fur catching the light, planting her foot on my back. “Kristal, there is no doubt in my mind were related,” I said with my face in the floor. “Ok now I'll feed you if you promise not get yourself in trouble today,” she said. “Hey, it’s not my fault that that gang is out to get me,” I said.

            &nb sp;  Junction town, a hive for scum and villainy, man, I got to stop watching those old movies. One of the biggest hover train hubs in the country, yet one of the poorest. A lot of criminals are just sitting in wait for some hover train to come by, jump it, hope there are no guards, and take whatever they can. Well, not my problem… unless I go into part time law enforcement.

Walking down one of the back roads, one eye behind my back, I went looking for the one guy I could call my friend. “Raven, what goes on?” I asked “Meh… I still don’t understand how you can know where I am.” said a voice from behind me. Raven, with his white hair and red eyes, was the most unusual character you’d ever meet. He never spook to anyone except Kristal and I, and always seemed to turn up where you least expected him. He’s my best friend.

            &nb sp;  Raven and I walked for a while making idle conversation. Suddenly I realized that I had walked us into a dead end. “Raven, I want you to go to the police station and tell them to bring a few ambulances, and just in case I don’t make it, a body bag.” I said to him, no a breath of sarcasm in my voice. “I'm not going to leave you here alone.” He said. We had both seen them, guys trailing us all day. I remembered what Kristal had said to me that morning. Ah man, she’s gonna starve me tonight. “Raven, go now.” I said. I heard him leave. Good, he wouldn’t get hurt because of me.

            &nb sp;  5 minutes later, surrounded by gang members, I was wondering if I should have sent Raven, I could have used him at my back. I had a bad feeling that I wouldn’t be walking home. There was a slight shift in the group, and appeared the man I really didn’t want to see “Kursed… I hear that you’ve been giving my boys some trouble.” “Sin, can’t believe that you would come yourself.” This guy was the leader of beg ‘Diablo negro’ (black devil) gang. He was a cold man, who would kill you if you just looked at him wrong.

            &nb sp;  “Tisk tisk Kursed, where are your manners?” he asked in a smug, mocking voice. I glared at him “You’ll get no courtesy from me. I’d never humble myself to trash like you.” I said. One of his cronies stepped forward. “Let me teach this runt a lesson boss.” He said in think speech. He gave a slight smile and waved him back. “You know Kursed; it’s not too late for you to come back. The gangs arms are always open.” He said. No, I’d left that world behind, years ago. He knew an answer wasn’t coming.

            &nb sp;  He sighed. “I'm sorry Kursed, but that was your only way out of here alive.” He said. He actually sounded sorry. He gave a little signal with his hand, and his cronies moved in. the poor saps. One came at me with a chain, swinging it like he was expecting me to think it was some weapon capable of killing me in one swing. I grinned, “Dude, you picked the wrong guy to mess with.” I caught the chain in mid swing, spun around him, and with the chain held high, jerking his arm into the air. After he found an implant of my shoe on his butt, and his face in a brick wall, I didn’t think he would get back up. But the others will still coming. Another, skinny guy came at me with a knife that looked just like him. I bashed his nose in with my knee and left him bleeding on the ground.

            &nb sp;  Again another came, this one with a base ball bat with a nice little nail sticking out of it. What a priss. I grabbed the bat and jabbed the end he was holding into his face, then followed through with an uppercut to the stomach. He was left gasping on the ground. But these guys were coming in groups, and they didn’t end.

            &nb sp;  About half an hour later, bloodied and bruised, Sin was standing above me, gloating. He squatted down next to me, ruffled my hair. “I'm sorry Kursed. If you had just made the right decision, you would have lived…” he said. He nodded to two of his goons. I was lifted by my arms into the air. Face to face with Sin. He had a knife in his hand. “Goodbye Kursed. I’m going to turn your body into a bloody canvas” He said, as he raised the knife. I closed my eyes, thinking ‘I wonder what death will feel like…’ when the arms dropped, and I opened my swollen eyes to the crowd, and saw Raven going ninja on their asses. That’s my bro. then, everything went dark.

Chapter 2

Kitty

Dark, comforting warmth. Some people are afraid of the dark, but not even darkness is void, with it comes things like touch, heat, smell, and other senses. But mostly warmth, I love it when it’s dark and warm, just the perfect feeling. And then there was light.

            &nb sp;  “Come now Mrs. Saravia, please get up. I don’t want to have to take desperate measures. I opened my eyes, and saw Gevon our butler, standing in the window. I groaned, “Gev, please, just a little longer,” I begged him. He sighed, “I can’t miss, on a regular occasion I would. But your father gave me strict orders to get you out of bed.” He explained.

 I got out of bed and hugged him close. I looked into his eyes, “Can’t you just this once lie and tell him I'm sick?” I asked. He blushed, turned his head and coughed awkwardly. “Miss… Your charms don’t work on me.” He said. I smiled, “Then why are you blushing?” I asked. He stepped back. “Miss, I must ask for you to get dressed. Your farther wants to see you.”

“What took you so long?” my gather said from his high backed leather chair. “Sorry, I had a little trouble getting out of bed,” I admitted. “Well, better late than never.” He grumbled. My fathers, another feline krytosian, like me; my mother was as well. My father was the C.E.O. of a major corporation, my mother helped him. When they were away, they were working, when they weren’t away, they were working. But somehow, they always managed to find a little time for me. “I've got a job for you angel.” He said

I wasn’t aloud out of the house with someone with me much, even if I was sixteen. The reason is that dad is worried that someone will try to kidnap me on account that I'm his daughter. He says he’d never forgive himself if that happened. I know that would never happen, I might be attractive, but I was smart. “Miss, I have to stop here. Welcome to junction town.” Gevon woke me from my day dreaming. “So Gev,” I started, “remind me, what am I supposed to do?” He sighed, “your `job’ is to collect information a boy named Kursed. He was involved in gang activity when he was younger, and charged with two accounts of theft, and three accounts of assault on gang members. He paid the fine for the thefts, and was found not guilty of assault. Those were in self defense. For three years he was docile, got a job, getting in some fights with the gang, and suddenly, two days ago, he was almost killed by a large gang. He’s in jail right now till he’s proved not guilty, but at this point it won’t matter. He’s gotten into so much trouble that he’s going to be sentenced to three years in prison, or drafted for the military.” I sighed. “Details details, what am I supposed to do!?” I asked, slightly annoyed. “You’re supposed to get his side of the story, and watch him for a while. Be inconspicuous, alright? We don’t want him to notice that you’re fallowing him around all the time.”

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Part two

Snow

The sun began to descend behind the horizon, the sweet smell of poppy flowers filled my head. Someone was playing music outside. I grabbed my stuff and locked up shop, ready to turn in for the day. As I walked down the street, I saw a boy, no older than me, playing on the corner, singing a song of past love. “Hate to love and love to hate her” he sang, in a sorrowful voice. I walked past him, stopping for a second to hear his song. After a while I continued on my way.

Suddenly, a arm reached out of an alley an grabbed me. A gravelly voice spoke from the darkness, “hey snow, you got our pay for this month?” it asked. A bead of sweat trailed down my forehead, “sorry Jamal, I don’t have it this month.” I answered. He chuckled, “well then, I guess we’ll have to take it another way,” he said, then snapped his finger. “Don’t let her leave boys, she’s coming with us, and won’t be leaving anytime soon.” Two shadows covered the entrance. I couldn’t run this was a bad idea, coming this way. Jamal stroked my chin with his finger, a big grin across his face.

A scream of pain came from behind me. I turned as saw both of the thugs drop to the ground, with another, smaller silhouette standing in their place. It was holding a staff that caught the sunlight like fire. “What do you think you’re doing runt? Get out of here if you know what’s good for you” threatened Jamal. I was afraid the figure would run, but it did the exact opposite. Jamal wasn’t in a very good mode, because he pulled a gun from under his jacket. I gasped; this kid didn’t need to get hurt for my sake. I saw Jamal smile real wide, then pulled the trigger. I screamed, but the figure still stood there, but instead of it spurting blood, the bullet was hanging in mid-air, about a foot away from the figure.

In a flash Jamal was on the ground, the figure standing in silent victory. “Um, thank you for the help,” I said, a bit timidly. He still stood there, quiet as ever. Suddenly, its knees buckled, and it fell to the ground. I rushed to its side, and saw that it was the boy playing on the street corner. Inspecting him closely, I saw that he had a scar across his right eye, and hair as blue as the ocean. Who is he?

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this isnt finished yet, im still working on it.

Chapter 6

Kitty

“Shesh, what a night” I said, stepping into the shower. I flicked my tail around. The water felt good against my fur. The room began to steam up. I reviewed the events of the night. But my focus was kursed. He seemed reluctant to everything I did. All my techniques I used just seemed to push him away. I wouldn’t loose to some kid. I had to use reveres physiology on him. I had to make him want me. I stepped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around me. I walked out and went over to Kristal. “Your turn or do you plan on sitting there for the rest of the night?” I asked her. “Ha-ha, very funny. Alright cat girl, move aside.” She said and got up. Suddenly my data pad started ringing. Kristal was in the shower. I picked it up and answered it. “Kitty here, what do you need, or are you just missing your little girl?” I said into the microphone. My dad’s voice answered “hey, how’s my girl? But that’s not what I’m calling about. I need your persuasive powers.” He responded. I laughed. Dad knew just who to call. “So who is the lucky guy?” I asked. “a bounty hunter named Xavier. He lives on silver lane, in a small apartment building with the number 401,” He said. “George is waiting for you outside.” He said. dad knew just the right recruiter.

Kursed

“The wind feels nice, hey Raven, thanks for showing me this place.” I said we sat on top of the dorm, looking onto the open sky. Raven was passive as usual. It’s like talking to a brick wall, but I know he hears and holds onto every word I say. A good friend and one that doesn’t ever get that feeling like your too similar, because he never says a word. Sweat silence is all that was heard. “So, what are you drawing?” I looked over at raven, who was drawing in his sketch pad. He sat there, silent as ever, so I took it from his hands. I looked, and stared at raven. “Seriously? You’re drawing that?” he glared at me like he was about to kill me, and for all I knew, he was going to. He snatched it back from me and started drawing again. I looked up at the sky. Our two moons looked back at me, with the stars surrounding it. A floating island went past, blotting out some of the stars. I guess life would never be the same after this. a new life had just started.

Kitty

I pulled up to the small apartment were the friendly was said to stay. I sighed; I don’t want to do this. It’s not my fault I’m attractive to men, curse my good looks. I walked up the stairs to the apartment door that he was supposed to live in. I opened the door; typical of a guy to leave his door unlocked. Man, I hope kursed isn’t the same way… I looked inside and saw the place was in ok condition, well at least there weren’t socks hanging from the ceiling. I will never get the picture of that guys house out of my head.

It looked like the guy wasn’t home, so I took a seat and waited for him to get back. Fortunately it was about five minutes before he showed up. The look on his face walking in to find a girl sitting on his couch, I should have taken a picture. “Uh, who are you and how did you get in?” he asked, his hand edging towards his left pocket. I smiled, this wouldn’t be hard, I could see he couldn’t take his eyes off me. “Are are you Xavier?” I asked. No doubt it was, but it was part of the get up. He flinched, and a slight flare of anger flared in his eyes. “The names X, not Xavier.” He said crossly. Well then, so rude. “Well, I’m with a nice little company that would like to employ you.” I said. he looked at me, confused. “what kind of company? Some assignation organization, Who are you working for.” I reached in my purse and brought out a data pad and handed it to him. He looked it over. “You call this little? The largest spy incorporation there is?” I nodded. “my father has taken into account of your skills, being able to take in any criminal without anything more that a broken bone, he’s impressed.” I told him. He looked proud; a grin came across his face. I wanted him to prove himself, not just leave him thinking that he was too good for us. “Who would have guessed a mutt like you could have such potential? I’m surprised that some criminal hasn’t killed the little puppy.” I struck him right where his pride was. He flinched and smiled a little. I stood up, “I hope to see you around in a while” I said. He stood up as well. “Uh, by the way, I’m single if you need a date….” Wow, a ladies’ man making a move. I laughed “Get to know me better, and I’ll think about it.” I walked out the door, having a feeling that I would see him again.

Chapter 7

Kursed

            &nb sp;  I sighed, thinking about all the places that I could be that would be better than here. In my room, in the gym, hell… “I hate me… were up against a maniac.” Said a voice from beside me. I looked over and could hardly see raven in his camo. I sighed again, “well, it could be worse, at least Foxx is here to protect us” I said sarcastically. In reality, Foxx was just as scared as we were. Really, these semi live skirmishes were getting annoying. We started with teams of ten, in a false jungle like environment, each team at opposite sides of the course. Both would engage each other, displaying strategies and tactics. On this game, the enemy walked into a much concealed trap. We set up men in trees, and set up in a clever v shaped wall, with soldiers in trenches and under foliage. When the enemy was in position, we opened fire, taking out seven of them, losing only four of our men. Then the countered with a mortar and took out two more, leaving it three to four. Our remaining men, which included Foxx, Raven and I, ran for cover, not wanting to get another taste of artillery. While running we managed to hit two of the remaining enemy, but one of our men was hit in the back. So it was me Raven and Foxx. And our enemy was kitty. This is very, very bad. So here we are, running through a jungle, with a girl with an unusual crosshair aimed at us.  Suddenly a pop rang out, and a splat sounded. We took off running, leaving Foxx, who was getting pelted with bullets. Just two left. I ran for high ground, raven bringing up the rear. In a sudden strike of panic, I realized we were pinned between the enemy and a wall. I did what seemed like a good idea, and ran up a tree. Raven came up after me. “alright, we have a trigger happy cat after us. We need something she wants that can give us the edge,” I said. I saw raven was about to say something, “and no, I’m not going to be bait.” “I have an idea that won’t put either of us in danger” he said.

As soon as raven told me what he plan was, we put it into action. It was quite simple really, we just needed our voices and a grenade. If this didn’t work, we were gonna need ice packs. Raven opened his mouth “Hey Kitty, look! Catnip and kursed with his shirt off!” he yelled. We heard a rustling, and a voice rang out “where? Where is he?” target found. I heaved the grenade, and was satisfied to here a buzzer go off. We walked out of the training area, to be met by a very ticked off kitty, covered in paint. “that was dirty.” She said, lifted her gun, and shot us both from five feet away. We both dropped to the ground like stones. Ice packs were needed. Raven raised his hand “medic, man down, she demon still standing…” he croaked. “Someone get the stretcher, and some fluids.” The pain was horrible. I looked up. “did you taper with the guns?” I asked. She smiled and tried to look innocent. “Maybe just a little, I used a screwdriver and turned some dials…” she droned off. I can’t believe it, she made her gun shoot like a little cannon. I groaned, and fell back on the ground. “What happened to you two?” oh great, just the person I didn’t want to see. Kristal stood over us in her usual outfit. “Go away, we were both shot from five feet away by Kitty’s mini bazooka.” I said. Kristal looked over at Kitty. “I’m so proud of you, you’ve come so far.” She said with fake glee. Raven and I sighed. We are so happy to have these two around all the time. They’ll be the end of us someday.

            &nb sp;  Kitty helped me up, so we headed to our next class, weapons tactics. As we walked inside the class room, I sent a swarm of metal into the air, and it flew into a small crook in the ceiling, and I heard yelling. Opps, did just foil some ones plans? My bad… Foxx, I just foiled your peeping plan. The first class we had in this subject, we thought the room was in shatters for no reason, but later Foxx had appeared with red cheeks, so I told raven to fallow him. He had later reported that Foxx made that hole in the ceiling to get a great angle at the female students. The pervert had been staring at girls all semester, so we decided to foil his plans each class we were in. truthfully, we were in it for the entertainment. I held up three fingers, two, one. The door slammed open, and there stood Foxx, with a glare on his face, staring at me and raven. “That’s the second time you two have annoyed me today, are you asking for trouble?” he asked. “Second? Oh, you mean when we left you to kitty to be pelted by paintballs? Well, what could we have done? You were out before we could help. Or do you need your combat armor to prove our point?” I said. Raven chuckled beside me, Kitty grinned, the little demon. Foxx’s eye began to twitch, “don’t make excuses, you are so guilty. “He said in an annoyed tone. We sat down for class, prepared for just another boring lesson. Naturally, I got stuck next to Kitty in pretty much in every freaking class. Oh sweet karma hates me, and probably my kids too… oh my gosh, she driving me over the edge. “alright, today were going to the simulator to give instruction on the right use of ammo.” Said Foxx. Well, maybe this class would be as bad as others, although I wish I really had challenge to put up with, unfortunately I can’t find anyone that could really match my flight ability. Then again, I’ve never fought anyone other than trainees. I’d do anything to fight against a pilot, I might actually lose. I doubt it though; I've taken on 3 people at once and survived, or won. So we packed our stuff and headed for the simulator. Sigh, Kitty would try something, not sure what, but something. WACK! Something hit me in the back of my head. I sighed again, not needing to turn around to see that It was vicho throwing rocks at the back of my head. I turned, “Raven, if you don’t mind,” I said, “I’m on it.” He answered quickly. He turned, saw where Vicho was, clapped his hands, and slapped them on the ground. And spire of muddy water shot out of the ground and total soaked Vicho straight down to the bone. That might come back later to bite us… oh who am I kidding, that good payback. She’d been tormenting us science I beat her in the simulator. Just another day in training camp with a group of crazy people like Foxx and Kitty, well, mostly Foxx, Kitty’s not that bad… just a little obsessed…with me. Man, how will I live like this until training is done? And they say war is hell, so what’s the training?

Then I was in the training room, standing in line to figure out how to shoot a gun, yippee. “Alright, four missiles per ship, and when it comes to guns, just fire until you see smoke, and or fire. Don’t wait to see if there still moving, just take them down, until they break into pieces. One trainee raised his hand “doesn’t that seem a little cruel?” he asked in a timorous voice. Foxx chuckled, “it will seem cruel when your enemy will shoot you in the back after you spare them. Chances are they wont show the same mercy.”

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srry i havnt been uploading it latly, ive been focusing more on drawing than writing. no stealing plz. hope u like it

Chapter 5

Kursed

“So, what do you think of Kristal’s new friend?” I asked Raven that night as we were getting ready for our night on the town. I was going in my usual plad church shirt, unbuttoned, with my shirt that said “signal transmission lost” on it. “Other than she has an odd choice of where to aim?” he asked. I looked at him. “Of coursed you idiot, that’s obvious.” I said, annoyed. “She’s a flirt, and she likes you.” He said, as if it was no big deal. I sighed. “That’s what I was afraid of.” I said. She was nice, but I had no knowledge of girls past my sister, and that’s not much. “Well, I’m already, are you almost done?” he asked me. “Yep, wait, let me guess. You’re wearing your black hood, and blue jeans.” I said. He laughed. “You know me to well.” He said. It was no surprise, that’s his usual night attire. “Well, there probably waiting for us, let’s go.” I said. I hadn’t told Raven about what happened earlier. The way I saw it, what happened in there, stayed in there. We walked into the lobby and saw the girls standing in the entrance. They both wore some odd cloths. Kristal in her t- shirt that was a little too small and jeans, and kitty in some kind of half jacket, and a short skirt that looked like it was made from jeans, and for some odd reason, she was warring a red scarf around her waist. I heard a bit of their conversation, it sounded like “there is now way you’re a double d, I’ve never met someone with that size.” Of course I had no freaking idea what they were talking about, so I didn’t inquire any further. Kristal noticed us.  “Hey guys, ready to go? Kitty somehow,” she stared at kitty. “Got us a hover car to town.” She said. “Well, that’s better than the hour ride on four hover boards.” I said. It’s true, that was our original means of transportation. We left the building and headed to the car. It had two rows of seats, plus the driver and the seat beside him. Raven jumped into the front seat with the obvious fraise “shotgun!” Kristal got in the second seat, so I hurried into the back. I was begging that kitty would spare me and sit next to Kristal, but my wish was shot down, over killed, then beat to a pulp. She decides that the seat on the side I was not sitting on wasn’t right, so she climbed over me, and managed to flick me with her tail. FLIRT ALERT!!! “George, were ready to go,” Said kitty. “Yes Miss Kitty, to the krytosian section of town?” He asked. “Uh-hu, and hurry please, we have a deadline.” She answered.

            &nb sp;  This was going to be one long car ride. Kristal started a conversation with the driver, and Raven was a quite as usual. DANG IT RAVEN, WHY CANT YOU BE TALKITIVE JUST THIS ONE?! I felt a tingle at my side, and looked down and saw Kitty’s tail stroking my side. What the heck is she doing? The flick became faster, and her tail started reaching farther in. it was now flicking my chest, and still reaching farther in. time to resort to drastic measures, before things got a little to awkward. What the heck is she doing? This is so weird… the tail stopped finally, but I’d rather had it flicking at the time. Oh, this was going to be one long car ride.

            &nb sp;  We got to the restaurant without any more flirting, but somehow kitty ended up sitting next to me. Ohhh, this is just great. “Dig in guys, it on me,” said kitty.  “Hope you brought your wallet,” Said Raven. I laughed. We all ordered, so I got a krytosian dish.  Raven obviously got some giant dish to feed two people. “Hey Raven, try not to choke here alright? They might kick us out for it,” Said Kristal. Ravens only response was his simple phrase “meh.” A man of many words he was. It was a very elegant restaurant, I had to say. It could only be described one way, “fancy”. We dug in; we hadn’t eaten that day because our instructor in tactics wouldn’t let us go until his lesson was over. Kitty started a conversation with me. “Hey kursed, what made you join the military?” she asked. I thought about it for a minute. That may be a question not even I can answer. “well, I guess so I could get enough money to travel, and get a job somewhere.” I told her. I was always trying to give Kristal a break. She always did the work to feed the three of us.  I continued to think about this when kitty gave an exclamation. “Dang it, I dropped my fork.” She reached down to grab it, but it was to far for her reach. She was about to get on all fours, when I realized something. Short skirt+ bending over= aww crap. I looked away. How am I supposed to get through the night?

After some check that looked like it was better just to eat money, we left, but realized we had some extra time, so we walked around town. We visited some stores, and bought some clothes while we were there. I managed to snag a nice new t-shirt, with the words “brother with arms” with two arrows pointing to my sleeves. I always chose the ridiculous shirts. They make everything seem less serious. I checked my pocket money, and realized I was low. I wanted to treat everyone to the movie, so I walked into a store, bought a hat (isn’t that redundant?) and walked to the park across the street. It was a busy park, with people going home and on their night schedules. I put the hat on the ground, and used metal control to make a guitar out of metal, and started playing. “It was a cold dark December, the rooftops I remember, there was snow, white snow.” I sang. People stopped as I continued, watching me. Some started to cheer, and others threw bills into the hat. I kept on singing until the song was over. I picked up the hat, stuffed the bills into my pocket. “Come on guys, let’s go see that movie.” I said. We walked to the theater, and bought our tickets for the new movie “the unknown soldier” some movie about a pilot that was a rouge and joined the army and became a hero. Raven and I picked it so that we might get some cool tricks from it. I had a note book in my bag, just in case.

            &nb sp;  As we entered the theater, we each got a pair of glasses. We put them on, and a display came up. Now this was the way to watch movies in first person!  We entered our berth, a private room used by twenty people, and the glasses brought up a display. Your movie will begin shortly. We sat and waited, and finally the movie started.

            &nb sp;  Halfway through the movie, I started getting hungry. I started eating the popcorn we got. Kitty was holding it, because she was in the middle. We got raven his own bucket for a reason. I was taking notes like a good little boy, so I wasn’t looking. I reached over and grabbed a handful. A very complicated part came up, so I just kept writing. I reached for another handful. Wait a second, that doesn’t feel like… oh crap.

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yay, page 4! it seems to get better the more i progress. comments plz.

We reached the firing range, and saw the instructor. It was Foxx. He looked up from the pistol he was shining. He waved “hey kursed, great party last night. The zombie apocalypse was nothing special, just a bloodbath for the undead.” He said. Kursed laughed. “I remember that hunter I took down. Shotgun shell to the face.” He said. “Well, let’s see if your aim is as good as it is in the game.” He said. The rest of the class showed up. So Foxx started some speech about how a gun is you only lifeline in battle. Never lose it. Blah blah blah blah. Then the word that I had been waiting for came “well, let’s see what you new recruits can do.” He said. We each steeped up and grabbed a pistol. It felt so familiar in my hand. “Alright, Raven, you can go first.” Said Foxx. Raven stepped up to the stall, raised the pistol, and took his shot. Foxx whistled “nice shot, right in the heart.” He said. He looked into the crowd and called on some new guy. He got up, took the shot and nailed his target in the leg. “Nice job for your first time,” Said Foxx “most just miss completely there first time.” He called on some other new people, and then called Kursed. He stepped up, raised his gun and fired. It went straight through the targets head. “Nice shot! A beautiful shot.” Said Foxx. “Well, I’m no sniper” said Kursed. He pointed his thumb at raven. “That’s his job.” He said. “Alright, Kitty, you’re up. I stepped up, raised my gun and took the shot. “Ohhhhhh……. Well, I guess that’s a nice shot.” He said. I turned, and saw kursed and raven staring at me. Then kursed spoke up. “What… is… wrong with you?!” he said. “That’s just wrong; you never shoot a guy in his pills!” Said someone in the crowd. Opps, I was used to shooting stun guns, and they always seemed to work better there. There was a lot of moaning and background sounds after that. The class was over suddenly, so we headed to our next class. This might just work out.

            &nb sp;              &nb sp;  That night, I headed back from my last class, who knew tactics could be so hard!? My mind was full of meaningless names and moves, but I guess I could ask Kursed to help me study later.  I took out my key, and opened the door. Kristal was standing there with the door of the bathroom half open. “Oh hi, how was your first day of classes?” she asked me. I groaned “ugh, so hard, boring and confusing.” I said. I sniffed the air. “And I smell like a pig from the drills they had me run from piloting.” I said. I could hardly bare to be in the same room as that stench, much less walk around everywhere with it. How could I get close to kursed if I smell like a communal bathroom? “Well, I’ll let you go first” said Kristal. “No, that’s fine, I guess I’ll wait.” I said back. Kristal sniffed the air, and then her nose cricked. “Wow, you do smell bad,” She said. Oh thanks, you’re such a good friend, please don’t remind me. She got an evil grin across her face. “But I do have an idea. Kursed and Raven are at the simulator, and all the guys went to watch. Kursed doesn’t need a key because he can just open the lock, so he gave me the key incase I needed something. You can just use the shower in there room.” She said with a smile. The risks were high, but I had to have a shower before I saw kursed. He’d never want to hang out with me if I smelled like this! “Alright, but I hope you’re not just joking with me.” I said. She looked offended. “Why would I ever want to joke around with you?” she asked. She had a point.

            &nb sp;  I took the key from her, and started down the hall to the guy’s room. The key worked, just like Kristal said it would. I looked around. Dang, this was a nice room. Wait a second, two rooms, two bathrooms, two showers. THAT’S NOT FAIR! Maybe I could use my powers of persuasion to get the dorm master to switch the guy and girls side and get us this room… I stepped into the bathroom on the left, and started the shower. I let my mind wander as I washed myself. What should I wear tonight? I know the plan was to go into town to get some dinner and see a movie, so this was my chance to make my move. Maybe I should ware my tight shirt with my jean cutoffs? No, to obvious. Or maybe my green shirt, with the text “I’m too good for you” and my orange skirt to complement? No, to flashy. My white half wind breaker with blue jean short skirt? That sounded good, not obvious, it was revealing, but not evident that I was trying to show off. And maybe my red scarf to go with it? Just right.

            &nb sp;  I got out of the shower, and picked up a towel. I had finished drying my legs before I realized, wait, think of who’s been using this! I pulled on my pants and walked out of the bathroom, going to get a fresh towel. When I opened the door and walked out, I smacked right into Kursed. He sat there, looking dazed. Time to take advantage of this situation, along with the whole cat gene thing. I edged forward and said “oh crap, not again!” yes! Nice cover. I hugged him, and said “Nya!” just to add to the effect of the whole gene thing. He looked so surprised. He was even cute when he was surprised. “Kitty, please get off of me.” He said. “I… I can’t!” I said in a labored tone, making it sound like I was trying really hard. He sat up and looked down, and almost broke his neck trying to look the other way. His face was so red; it was hard to tell his fur was really blue. “Uh, Kitty, you do realize you’re half nude right?” he asked. “Well, I can’t really do anything about that can I?” I said back. I laid down in his lap and flicked my tail around. I was so hot. He sighed, and laid his hand on my head and started stroking me again. Ahhh, it felt so good. He’s so nice, so kind, and so cute. “Kitty, why were you in here anyway?” he said over the rumbling of my purrs. “Kristal sent me in here to take a shower, and I listened, and when I was done, I went to go find a clean towel, and then you came in.” I explained. He got up then, went to a dresser, and took a towel out of it. He threw it to me. “Here, use that to get rid of the stuff that you didn’t wipe all over me.” He said. I dried myself off, but I didn’t feel that he had seen enough. I wrapped the towel around my front, and said “hey kursed.” He turned. I walked over to him, and hugged him again. “Thank you for that. If there’s ever anyway I can repay you, let me know,” I pulled the towel down just a bit “please.” I said. I’m such a flirt. “Uuummmm, ok, thanks… I guess…” he said. I smiled. “You’re welcome,” I grabbed my shirt and put it on, then took the towel from underneath. “And remember, anytime.” I said, and walked into the hallway. I think that went well.

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im getting really far, i now have over 5000 words, but theres something wrong with the format, but i dont know how to fix it, so just deal with it.

            &nb sp;  I headed for the door, because it looked like vicho was going to take another swing. As I left the room, I saw Kitty using the door that lead outside. I fallowed her, wondering where the heck she was going. She entered a patch off woods behind the amphitheater. Not wanting her to see me, I climbed a tree. OH GREAT! I was becoming Raven! This was just great. She stopped in a clearing surrounded by trees. She sat on a rock and starred up at the sky. She seemed to be day dreaming. I was about to revile myself, when she opened her mouth, and started singing in krytosian. The thing about krytosian was that we sang so the lyrics sounded good, but the translation was nothing but words that didn’t rhyme. Here’s what she was singing: aimo aimo neder rushe noina miria ender prodea fotomi, lulei luleia aimo aimo neder rushe noina miria ender prodea fotomi. Ahh, the folk song of eternal peace. It was a favorite children song. I remember singing it when I was young. She sang for a little longer, and I just waited, enjoying the song. When it appeared that she was done, I finally revealed myself. I wrapped my legs around the tree limb I was sitting on, leaned back, and swung around to face her.

Chapter 4

Kitty

“Dang, you got some pipes.” A voice said from behind me. I turned around, drawing the pistol that I always carried with me to bare. If there was one thing I ever learned in my family’s line of work, it was always carry a weapon. This gun was loaded with stun bolts. When I saw who the intruder was, I blushed, and put away the gun. It was the target boy, kursed. He was hanging upside down from a tree limb, watching her. Man he was cute. “You scared me.” I said, a little annoyed. “Don’t tell me you were listening to that song.” I said. He looked confused. “There’s nothing wrong with having a great voice” he said. Oh my gosh, he just complimented me! “Don’t be afraid to use it.” He said. That’s great, now I’m getting lectures from a kid a year younger than me. A very cute kid anyway. “Didn’t your sister ever tell you not to eavesdrop?” I asked him, really annoyed now. “Yes, but I never listened. I’m starting to regret it now though. No one ever pulled a gun on me before.” He said. He had a cocky grin on his face for some reason. “What’s with that expression?” I asked him. “I was just thinking how funny it was that you think you could harm me with a simple stun gun. Go ahead, shoot. Well, you’re a girl; you probably don’t have the guts to shoot an unarmed teenager.” He said, his grin only getting bigger. Was he trying to tick me off, because he was doing a very good job of doing it. “Or are you all talk?” he asked. That was the last straw. I had guts, no doubt about that. I upholstered the gun, and took a shot, if only to shut him up. There was a flash of light, and then when the flash cleared, he was sitting there, in the same position, with the same grin. “Ya, nice try.” He said. He’s smile was all the larger now. “Uhh, how exactly did you do that?” I asked. That was so weird. The bullet just disappeared. He let go of the branch with his legs, did an impressive back flip, and landed on his feet. He walked over to me, and held out a rose. “Take it.” He said. I did as he told me, and almost dropped it. The rose was ice cold. I looked at it more closely, and realized it was made of solid metal. “How did you do that?” I asked him. “Didn’t anyone ever tell you? Questions are a danger to you, and a burden to others.” He said. Dang, he was cocky. But a second later he answered my question. He held out his hand, and a stream of metal came from his finger tips. They materialized into a solid ball of metal. “Every krytosian has a power. I can control metal, shape it, use it to my advantage.” He said. “So that’s how you blocked my shot.” I said, figuring it out. “Yep. Told you I wouldn’t work.” he said. He looked around, seeming to take the place in. “well, sorry that I disturbed you.” He said. He turned to leave. Wait! I wasn’t ready for him to leave yet! I called to him “he kursed!” he turned around. “What is it?” he asked. “Thanks for beating Vicho. I think a lot of people got encouragement from that.” I said. He smiled, ohhh, he was just so cute! I wanted to run up and squeeze him. “You’re welcome, but it was me and Raven.” He said. He was so modest. He left the woods, and I thought about fallowing him, but thought better of it.

            &nb sp;                  I decided it was time to call it a night, and walked back to the dorm. I walked inside, turned, and almost smashed right into Kristal. “Oh, hey! I was coming to find you. Turns out his place has a stupid curfew.” She said in a disappointed tone. I grinned “well, there go’s our chances of a night life.” I said. “Why, do you have somewhere to be?” I asked her. She blushed. “I kinda have a little crush on the guy who did the orientation.” She said. “Foxx?” I asked her. She nodded. I didn’t want to make fun of her, but then again, I had weird choices in guys. “Well, he is handsome.” I said, not really meaning it. I wasn’t really interested in the guy. “Ready to go back to the room?” I asked. She stopped blushing, and smiled. “Sure, I was about to say the same thing.” She said.  We walked back to our room, and I know I was hoping for a nice long shower. I heard some yelling coming from the boys dorm, it sounded like a fight was going on, with voices yelling “there, hit ‘em there!” and “look out another one!” I looked over at Kristal, seeing if she noticed too, but she had an annoyed face on her face. “Do you know what that is?” I asked her. “Stupid alchemist, he can make anything out of screws, silicon, and plastic. They probably took apart there Xbox 720, and slipped behind security.” She said. As we watched, we saw Foxx come along. Kristal smiled. “Now they’ll get it. Foxx’ll let’em have it.” She said. He opened the door, looked inside and yelled “no way! You slipped that through!? I call next game!” and rushed inside. I heard a thumping, looked over, and saw that Kristal was beating her head against a wall. And that’s when the music started. “Don’t want to be an American idiot!” started playing super loud. A fully fledged party, complete with video games, drinks, soda, and music. I grab Kristal’s arm “common, let’s go sound proof our room and take a shower. She seemed dazed… beating your head against a wall about 20 times will do that. I grabbed her hand and led her into the room. “I can’t stand that my brother has raven on his side! They can make anything out of relatively nothing!” she seemed really ticked off, so I decided to let her cool down first. She went inside, and I heard the water start. I sat a brought out my data pad. I started my daily report. Have made basic contact with target and have established foot holds with the targets family. I am roommate with his sister, and I am as close as can be to him. Will report back later, kitty. I wrote in the protocol, and then decide to write to my mom with a more personal message. “Dear mom, I have met the target of the mission. He is younger than expected, only 14. I have taken one or two pictures of him, so now we might have some more information on him. I’m really glad that you sent me here, I’ve already made friends with a few of the recruits, and have gotten close to the target too. I think my greatest advantage is being bunked with the targets sister. She is nice, a blue vixen with a good sense of humor. She definitely trusts me. I guess I’ll write back to you tomorrow,  kitty.

            &nb sp;  I’m sure mom will appreciate the message, when Kristal walks out. “That was nice. It’s rare for me to get a nice long hot shower like that.” She said, sounding content. She looked at me. "Your turn, hope I didn’t use up all the water. But if I did, come and see me, I’ll get kursed to up the output on the water heater.” She said I got up and walked into the shower room. It was nice and steamy, and the water was already hot. I began to undress. I got under the water, and enjoyed the feeling of the water washing down me. I stayed in there for about half an hour, and then got out. When I came back into the bed room, Kristal looked up, looked me over, and said “Dang, I’m not going to be able to barrow any cloths from you.” She said. I laughed. “It’s not my fault; blame my genes, wherever they came from.” I said.

            &nb sp;  I didn’t feel like going to bed right then, so I decide to walk around the dorm a while. I walked into the lobby and sat down in a seat by the front door. The music was still playing and the games still going on. I heard a door open. A voice said “hey guys, I’m going to get some air.” I heard footsteps coming down the hallway, and kursed came around the hallway. “Hey, you ok?” he asked. Man he was cute. He sat beside me… wait, oh no, my cat genes were coming out. I tried to just ignore it, but I couldn’t. I tried just moving or talking to kursed. “So, how your party going in there?” I asked. I was just trying to keep myself occupied, if I didn’t… “It’s fine, a bit wild.” He said. Oh no, it’s getting worse… if I didn’t do something soon, I might widen the gap in the bridge I made with him. “Is it true that Raven is an alchemist?” I asked. Man, I was getting desperate! “Ya, he made our room twice as large by destroying the wall between and old room and ours.” He said. I couldn’t stop it! “I’m sorry, I can’t stop this from happening!!” I said, and let go. My body seemed to move on its own. I started purring, and edging closer and closer to him. He looked very nervous, but he didn’t move. Maybe he was too scared to move… suddenly I was right beside him, and I started rubbing against him, first with my side, then I faced him head on. Up, down, up, down, I couldn’t stop! My tail was moving around with a life of its own, curling around him, stroking his cheek… I suddenly felt very tired, and my head fell… right into his lap. I expected him to get up and leave, but he stayed and sat there. Then I felt his hand on my head. He ran he hand down my neck, then down my back. He was petting me! This guy really knew how to treat a cat. The pitch of my purring increased, and I slowly started to fall asleep…

            &nb sp;  I woke in my bed, not having any idea how in the world I had got there. “Wake up Kitty, I know you’re a cat but it’s time to get up. We have classes today.” I looked over and saw Kristal, getting dressed. I probably made some comment unknown to the human ear, like “wha…” she looked disappointed maybe because I wasn’t up yet. I stretched, arching my back like a cat. Kristal laughed. “Wow, you sleep at the end of the bed, and even stretch like a cat. I walked over to my dress, looked inside, and took out my red shirt, fresh undergarments, and my cutoffs. “So, where’s our first class?” I asked her. “Actually, I’m going to be an operator, so I have different classes entirely. Maybe you could go find kursed and raven and take classes with them.” She said. Yay! I could spend lots of time with kursed. Man, he was so cute! “Well, I have to go; my classes are on the other side of the camp, so see you later.” She said. “Kay’ sees you.” I said then I remembered something. “Hey Kristal!” I yelled. She turned around. “What is it?” she asked. “How did I even get in our room?” she laughed. “Kursed carried you in after you passed out purring.” She said. I blushed. He cared about me enough to carry me into my room, instead of just leaving me in there.  Kristal continued on her way, so I went to find kursed. I hope I didn’t scare him off last night. Dang hormones, coming in now of all times. I walked into the lobby and saw kursed sitting, talking to raven. I walked over. “Hey kursed.” I said. What, I’m just shy right now, not know what the heck this guy, I mean kid thinks about me. He looked up. “Oh, hey kitty. We were just discussing our class schedule, come and give us a hand will you?” he said. Well, he wasn’t uncomfortable around me. I looked at what they had written so far. “Well, we need to focus on the classes that will end up saving our skins in battle, so maybe firing range, piloting 101, and tactics?” I said. They both looked at me. “Wow, that’s probably exactly what we need.” Said kursed. “Well, let’s head to the firing range.”  He said. We walked out of the dorm and head for the field on the west edge of the camp. I walked up beside kursed. “Hey, sorry about what happened last night… I really don’t understand what happened.” I said. This was so embarrassing, especially because I went all close and personal on him. He smiled “hey, it’s ok; it’s not your fault that your cat genes kicked in. Its fine, I don’t mind though.” He said. This whole genes thing might actually might work to my advantage… heheheh.

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“We also have a gym if you’d like to work out, or play sports.” Foxx continued. So enjoy your stay at helian military training camp. Would you look at me, I sound like a tour guide!” he said. The lights went back on, and everyone shuffled out. I grabbed raven, and ran towards the door, and from there, the Rec room.

            &nb sp;  “Dang it! Vicho, I don’t know how you win every time! It a mystery.” Said a pilot. Vicho sat at the flight simulator entrance, basking in the glory of victory. I was going to wipe that smug look off her face. “I’ll take on the best.” I said.  A few people laughed, but most stood there, looking astonished. “A newbie? Hardly worth my time.” She said in a bored tone. “Well, how about two of us?” I said. “raven and I verses you.” I said. Some people were beginning to doubt her. “Fine, I’ll take you both on” she said in a confident tone. Good, she thought she was tough, all the more spiteful. Raven and I proceeded to the doors that led to the simulator rooms. When we entered, it was pitch black except for a console in the middle of the room. I stepped up to the consol, and looked at the options. I selected join game, and joined the one that came up. The option make custom selven and auto selven came up. I chose custom. It then brought up 6 options came up. There was body, arms, legs, head, weapons, and colors. I chose a head that had two antennas sticking from the top, a body with a gun in the chest, legs with quad boosters, arms with deployable blades, and a light chain gun weapon, and a flash burst missile as a special weapon. As colors, I chose a blue body with yellow trim. I pressed the enter button, and another screen came up, choose control type: I chose dual analog and foot commands. It sounded the easiest. Another screen came up it was a name command. I put in kursed1, just to make things simple. Then a waiting screen appeared, with 3 names on it. I looked this is what the page said. 1-2 match. Teams1: blood raven; kursed1. Team2: u r dead. Charming, but then the screen went blank, and all the lights went out.

            &nb sp;  All the sudden, everywhere lit up at once. I was sitting in a bubble, with a controller and foot pedals in front of me. A box of text appeared in front of me. It was a list of the controls for the selven. I’ll simplify it for you. The button closest to my right thumb we shoot gun, the one above and to the left of it fired missiles, and the one to the right of that was the map. The left analog stick aimed my gun, and the right moved the selven when it was in Arial mode. Selvens have 3 forms: Arial was like a plane, Valhalla was like a robot, and guardian was like a cross between the two. The foot pedals controlled my thrust, and a button above my right hand was special weapon. I passed that screen, and heard Vicho’s voice come across the head set. “Come on newbie’s, I haven’t got all day! Let’s end this within five minutes. I’ve got bigger foxes to fry.” She said in a mocking tone. I turned off the public shat, and spoke to Raven. “What did you go with?” I asked him. “A sniper model with battle camouflage. The perfect sniper.” He said. I like the way he thought. “Ok, here’s the strategy. I’ll engage her from close range, while you keep her busy with ranged support. Get on the ground and cover me. Make sure she doesn’t see you.” I said. “Let’s take the big girl down a notch.” He said. big red and orange letters appeared on the screen.

ready?

Fight!

I went low, hoping vicho wouldn’t see me and I could take her by surprise. I looked behind me, and saw that  she was right behind me. A sign in front of me stated blaring saying “missile alert!” I swerved, but those missiles were determined. They copied my every move. that she was right behind me. A sign in front of me stated blaring saying “missile alert!” I swerved, but those missiles were determined. They copied my every move. I pressed the button that would change me into a Valhalla, turned, and opened up with my machine gun. The missiles disappeared, but I just kept on firing. Vicho, avoided the shots, and came up with a salvo of her own. I shifted my feet to the left, and dodged the blasts. Dang it Raven! Where are you? My question was answered a second later when a blast pasted Vicho with inches to spare. She swerved off, not wanting to picked off by a sniper. I launched a group of missiles as she fled. She swerved, and some flew off in odd directions. But two were still on her tail. She dodged on, but the second hit her in the jumpjet. Raven took the opportunity and launched a bunch of missiles and took a ton of shots. One shot nailed Vicho in the arm, damaging her gun, and another in the leg. The rest whizzed of in all directions. I took the chance, selected the gun that was in my body, and fired. That thing was like a cannon. I shot backwards, almost lousing control. Vicho took the shot straight to the chest. Her Selven exploded, and all the lights went out. The door behind us opened, and I walked out. Raven was there, looking like a brick wall, as usual. And that’s when Vicho stepped put. She walked straight over to me, curled a fist, and took a swing. I ducked, grabbed her arm, and flipped her over my shoulder. She landed on her butt, looking stunned. She got up, and started rambling on about how impossible it was, that we cheated. Someone in the crowd yelled “all evidence points to that you cheated Vicho.” “Ya! If two newbies beat you, why can’t we?” the crowd erupted into chatter.

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these are the main cahracters from worlds at war. hope u enjoy!

akio(LadyByakugan98): a regular tomboy. she has brown furr, and blond hair. she is feline, comes from an orphanage. she is sometimes called the armada girl because she is always overkilling. she love to fight, and joined the military to get a slice of the action.

Naia(weloveanime98):a regular wiz kid. ud want her help in a test than a battle. she loves to read, has pink hair and furr, is feline, comes from a middle calss family, and has a crush on kursed, but is to shy to admit it.

Raven(scott McClure, has no account):the creepy dude. he will stalk u, then appear from out of nowhere. her is a white haired feline with red eyes and a chiliing stare. not much in known about his past. all we know is that he came from the far north at a young age and grew up by himself for most of his life. he mysteriously disapers once every winter for some unknow reason. he is always areing heavy clothing. he is the top dog, er cat sniper of the military.

Angel(kitty77): was adopted at age 9, and was taken under the saravia family and stayed with them for 6 years before joining the military. she is an enormous flirt, but is very picky. she has been cahrged with many accounts of starting fires, and seting off weapons of mass destruction. she is a balck and white feline, and has an enormous crush on kursed.

kristal:(based of kristal_blue) a blue vickson with an attitude. she loves winning, and is an opperator for the military. seh is cuently in love with the piolt fox. she has little information on her passed, and only seems ot appear from age 9 to present date. she is kursed older sister, and keeps him close. there is no record of anyother family.

kursed(mine): the hero of the book, he is the top piolt in the military at this point of time. he has little awarness of how the people around him feel about him. he is a blue vickson, and has the power of metal control. he only appears in records from age 7 to present day. he is a master in all kinds of combat, but has little life experience. he loves to sing and play the guitar, and the name of his selven is the toal. his battle cry is "your life is the toal, i am the collector. he is a hot head, and has little tolerance for pervertedness. that is one of the main reasons that he dosnt get along well with angel at times.

xavier(kitty77)- kittys boyfriend, and kursed irval. he is cockey, and thinks hes supirior to everyone else. he treats kursed like a nucence becasue he jelous of his relaionship. he is a world know bounty hunter, and goes by the code name x. he can barrow other peoples powers for a limited time.

snow ymara- kursed love intrest after he "dies" she is and ordinary street girl who grew up on her own. she is a white artic fox,all that is know is that she comes from the far north.(kitty77 and i made her up) she is a flirt, and likes kursed, but doesnt know about his other life(only 2 people know what that means)

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this is the new version of world at war. i hope u like it!

Worlds at war

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