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Immortals
Posted On 10/24/2011 23:20:47

Immortals

by ~Inuderf83

Sitting in a shopping cart at the peak 
of a hill, little Mathew asked "big 
brother, will this hurt?" his innocence 
bled out of his eyes, big brown is 
what I called him because of his eyes, 
they cuddle so comfortably above his 
cheeks, and in the center a little 
button nose. 

In the background you could hear the 
pelicans, smell the ocean in the air, 
hear the wave's collide at the 
shoreline; the asphalt was hot under 
the mid-day sun, it ran straight down 
the prominence and onto the beach. 
Our plan was not the most brilliant 
thing in the world, but we were there 
to have fun. "No it won't, not one bit. 
We´re immortal remember." I Said as 
I pushed to launch off, we both 
screamed and yelled, a few 
pedestrians tried to stop us but we 
resisted. 



Big brown jumped up on the edge of 
the dock over hanging some fifty 
feet, looking back at me he asked 
"will I fly?" no fear entered my heart, 
but instead inspiration, inspiration to 
fly. "If you want it hard enough, you 
will." A smile spread across his face 
causing him to squint brown eyes 
under freckle covered cheeks. 

"Will it hurt?" he asked, with his head 
tilted slightly to the left. "We´re 
immortals it cannot hurt." Without 
another word he jumped, I followed 
and we both flew, even though it was 
for a few seconds but we where the 
boys who flew. 




Brown eyes opened wide, the day we 
found our fathers pistol in the closet, 
the idiosyncratic scent it carried of 
lubricant and crude metal was 
exceptional, the way it felt in my 
hand, it made me feel not only 
immortal but powerful, not a good 
mixture. He stood side ways to me, 
his head positioned straight towards 
the closet, with a big swallow he 
asked "brother, what are you 
thinking?" his voice was shaken; I 
could feel wild energy coursing 
through my veins like fire. With an 
evil grin on my face I said "let´s play 
cowboys and Indians." 



Tears stung my eyes as I saw, big 
brown eyes closed tight. He looked 
angelic; I could almost see the halo 
right over his head; with white satin 
cloth lining the mahogany casket 
where he laid. I felt a hand perch on 
my shoulder; I looked up to see my 
uncle Liam, and all I could say "This 
can´t be? He was immortal."


Footnote: this was another really fun assignment to write. This was something that I had looked up and I wanted to share it with you all, so you could get a taste of what my writing is all about. Enjoy!

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The days the sun cries
Posted On 10/24/2011 23:10:19


by ~Inuderf83

The days the sun cries 



I´m starting to consider that you´re a bit pedophilic, you´ve 
watched me mature, you saw me take my first steps, you 
where there every day, and every evening you told me 
goodbye and left. Yet you still stand there and kiss my lips, 
warm them, nibble at them. How can you do this? 

I feel you caressing my body, toying with it. Sometimes I hate it 
when you do so, coloring my crust red; but then there are 
those times that I shut my eyes and enjoy every second of it, 
feeling you caressing my jaw line and stroking my cheeks till 
they´re red. 

You think that I don´t see you cry, every day you cry, because 
you know that we could never make love at night, you try your 
best to stretch the days, peeking over the hills at sundown and 
come morning time, you peek again waiting to see me, but I 
cheat on you, I linger not for you, I slumber instead. 

Even though I cheat on you, you still love me, you shield me 
with rays that form into warriors and with just a crack of my 
fingers I could command them to attack anyone my heart 
wishes. But you know I have not the heart for that. 

But the sad thing is that you know, and I know that we could 
never be, if I was to move my world a foot towards you, I´d 
die, not because I love you and know that I´m closer towards 
you, but because the things that I love about you is that you 
are warmth and like all things too much of it is bad for the 
human body. So in some ways I cry for you too.



Footnote: This is one of my older works, you see, I did a search and found out that DN had deleted all my old blog post and well wanted people to still enjoy this.

Tags: Days Inuderf83 Sun Cries


Hello, welcome me back
Posted On 10/23/2011 18:42:21

Hey everyone, guess what I'm back! yes, the Inuderf83 is back, most of you might not even recognize me on this, some of you might not even finish reading this. 

After a few years of no logging in anything to do with my creative side, I've decided that it's time to get in touch with my creative side again. 

I remember when I was top blogger, those were the days. But hey, I've come to get that title again, and no I wont blog about crap, actually gonna do some real writing just like last time. So if you've read something of mine, or for some reason the name inuderf83 rings a bell in that precious little mind let me now. I want to know who I inspired on this site, to write more. xD 


Well hate to leave you all like this, but latter. I got to go start some writing. 

Tags: Inuderf83 Hello Welcome Back


-I tried my best- For Beccah_is_me
Posted On 12/09/2009 10:17:36

As soon as I heard the news I scurried off to prepare you a cake

making the cake

But something went wrong

explosion

So I had to start all over again, luckly this time I got it right

cake

happy birthday

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-Say Goodbye-
Posted On 12/08/2009 12:49:09

Just want to let you know that I will no longer be on as much. I´ve been asigned to another office (a much busier office) and well that means I wont be able to logg in as much.

I hope you all grow as artist I know I have.

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-The days the sun cries-
Posted On 12/07/2009 12:41:01
The days the sun cries



I´m starting to consider that you´re a bit pedophilic, you´ve
watched me mature, you saw me take my first steps, you
where there every day, and every evening you told me
goodbye and left. Yet you still stand there and kiss my lips,
warm them, nibble at them. How can you do this?

I feel you caressing my body, toying with it. Sometimes I hate it
when you do so, coloring my crust red; but then there are
those times that I shut my eyes and enjoy every second of it,
feeling you caressing my jaw line and stroking my cheeks till
they´re red.

You think that I don´t see you cry, every day you cry, because
you know that we could never make love at night, you try your
best to stretch the days, peeking over the hills at sundown and
come morning time, you peek again waiting to see me, but I
cheat on you, I linger not for you, I slumber instead.

Even though I cheat on you, you still love me, you shield me
with rays that form into warriors and with just a crack of my
fingers I could command them to attack anyone my heart
wishes. But you know I have not the heart for that.

But the sad thing is that you know, and I know that we could
never be, if I was to move my world a foot towards you, I´d
die, not because I love you and know that I´m closer towards
you, but because the things that I love about you is that you
are warmth and like all things too much of it is bad for the
human body. So in some ways I cry for you too.
 
 
 
 
 
Inspiration hit me in a taxi ride, I know it´s nothing good. I will have to proof read it someday.
I love comments so please leave as much as you want.



Please don´t steal my work, it´s a lot better to make your own plus this is copyrighted me, Fred Chirinos.

Tags: Inuderf83 Poetry Poem Love Sun


-The boy that cried Rape-
Posted On 12/07/2009 12:04:19
Dear, Daddy



I try, oh too hard to forget you

To forget the many nights you slipped into bed with me

The many nights you woke me

The many nights you whispered in my ears "I love you, that´s why I do this"

The many nights mom would wake and find you gone

The many nights I cried because all I can think is why mom would let you do this to me?

The nights, I liked it

The nights I wanted you near

The cold nights you weren´t there

The nights I heard you with mom instead of with me

The mornings I would wake with the scent of you on me

The nights I would say under my breath "I hate you."

The nights that I would have to dodge in my closet to escape you

That´s why I´m happy that they found you

I´m happy that you can no longer tell me such sweet words

That no longer can you crawl in my bed

But I´d like you to know that, I still fear the night I hear "I love you, that´s why I do this"



Without love; your forgotten son

Tags: Inuderf83 Poem Poetry Rape Boy Cried That


Immortal, poem
Posted On 12/07/2009 12:02:53
Sitting in a shopping cart at the peak
of a hill, little Mathew asked "big
brother, will this hurt?" his innocence
bled out of his eyes, big brown is
what I called him because of his eyes,
they cuddle so comfortably above his
cheeks, and in the center a little
button nose.

In the background you could hear the
pelicans, smell the ocean in the air,
hear the wave's collide at the
shoreline; the asphalt was hot under
the mid-day sun, it ran straight down
the prominence and onto the beach.
Our plan was not the most brilliant
thing in the world, but we were there
to have fun. "No it won't, not one bit.
We´re immortal remember." I Said as
I pushed to launch off, we both
screamed and yelled, a few
pedestrians tried to stop us but we
resisted.

+

Big brown jumped up on the edge of
the dock over hanging some fifty
feet, looking back at me he asked
"will I fly?" no fear entered my heart,
but instead inspiration, inspiration to
fly. "If you want it hard enough, you
will." A smile spread across his face
causing him to squint brown eyes
under freckle covered cheeks.

"Will it hurt?" he asked, with his head
tilted slightly to the left. "We´re
immortals it cannot hurt." Without
another word he jumped, I followed
and we both flew, even though it was
for a few seconds but we where the
boys who flew.


+

Brown eyes opened wide, the day we
found our fathers pistol in the closet,
the idiosyncratic scent it carried of
lubricant and crude metal was
exceptional, the way it felt in my
hand, it made me feel not only
immortal but powerful, not a good
mixture. He stood side ways to me,
his head positioned straight towards
the closet, with a big swallow he
asked "brother, what are you
thinking?" his voice was shaken; I
could feel wild energy coursing
through my veins like fire. With an
evil grin on my face I said "let´s play
cowboys and Indians."

+

Tears stung my eyes as I saw, big
brown eyes closed tight. He looked
angelic; I could almost see the halo
right over his head; with white satin
cloth lining the mahogany casket
where he laid. I felt a hand perch on
my shoulder; I looked up to see my
uncle Liam, and all I could say "This
can´t be? He was immortal."

Tags: Poetry Inuderf83 Immortal


What´s the point?
Posted On 11/27/2009 13:02:50

I´ve started to ask myself what the point of staying as a member at DN, you might think stop complaining and leave.

Well answer me this, why would DN provide and instant messenger if it was created only to post your art?

Or why one can comment on one another art?

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