Hey guys just wanted to put this on here for a summary review i love reading manga and watching anime and playing video games so i thought maybe i should create my own manga and i came up with this i'm trying to get this copywritten soon but i have to see if the editors like it or not so i decied to start here so if u guys could give me ur honest opinion about the first chapter that would be great so i know if anyone likes it i worked really hard to try and come up with it but you decide how it is ok here it is


The Road to Dawn (fan Made Manga) By Resaan Bowman First Chapter impression


The Story opens up as 14 year old Akira Hatsume Begins his first day at Maboroshi Academy where he meets Sayori Sugikara and Shuyin kisaragi. The three of them conversate about maboroshi Academy then suddenly the Verxai Family appears in a black limo in front of the school. The students rush out to see the Verxai of course security won't let anyone get near them as they walk to the front of the
Students the Famous Riyuko Verxai the eldest of the children of Verxai. He then glares at Akira for a brief moment signifying that he is different from the rest and intriguing. Behind Riyuko is Kimiko Verxai the younger sister of riyuko the academy boys drool over her but with her attitude she doesn’t even look at one of them and keeps moving forward. Then everyone expects the third verxai to show up but he doesn’t he had left before the rest of the family came and once head master Hiroshi announces that the 3rd verxai member is inside the school all the students rush inside to go and see where he is. Later on that same day Akira sayori and shuyin go to the top of the school to get away from all of the excitement of the school and when they arrive a mysterious person stand in the wind he turns around with an expression on his face like he wants to battle. Shuyin get’s frightened and steps back akira asks why and shuyin says it’s him the one everybody’s looking for the man turns around and shuyin says Axel Verxai.            
             ;     this manga is shounen which means is has a lot of action in it mixed with supernatural things and drama to get that feel of emotion and comedy to keep viewers entertained also yes this is the first actual chapter and i will post a thread about the actual story soon             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;     thank you for your time

Hey guys just wanted to put this on here for a summary review i love reading manga and watching anime and playing video games so i thought maybe i should create my own manga and i came up with this i'm trying to get this copywritten soon but i have to see if the editors like it or not so i decied to start here so if u guys could give me ur honest opinion about the first chapter that would be great so i know if anyone likes it i worked really hard to try and come up with it but you decide how it is ok here it is


The Road to Dawn (fan Made Manga) By Resaan Bowman First Chapter impression


The Story opens up as 14 year old Akira Hatsume Begins his first day at Maboroshi Academy where he meets Sayori Sugikara and Shuyin kisaragi. The three of them conversate about maboroshi Academy then suddenly the Verxai Family appears in a black limo in front of the school. The students rush out to see the Verxai of course security won't let anyone get near them as they walk to the front of the
Students the Famous Riyuko Verxai the eldest of the children of Verxai. He then glares at Akira for a brief moment signifying that he is different from the rest and intriguing. Behind Riyuko is Kimiko Verxai the younger sister of riyuko the academy boys drool over her but with her attitude she doesn’t even look at one of them and keeps moving forward. Then everyone expects the third verxai to show up but he doesn’t he had left before the rest of the family came and once head master Hiroshi announces that the 3rd verxai member is inside the school all the students rush inside to go and see where he is. Later on that same day Akira sayori and shuyin go to the top of the school to get away from all of the excitement of the school and when they arrive a mysterious person stand in the wind he turns around with an expression on his face like he wants to battle. Shuyin get’s frightened and steps back akira asks why and shuyin says it’s him the one everybody’s looking for the man turns around and shuyin says Axel Verxai.            
             ;     this manga is shounen which means is has a lot of action in it mixed with supernatural things and drama to get that feel of emotion and comedy to keep viewers entertained also yes this is the first actual chapter and i will post a thread about the actual story soon             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;             ;            &n bsp;     thank you for your time