meh 2 poems (plz comment on them)

Tears of the sky

 Tears of a lie

Tears to cry I think i might die

The day of Death

The day u left
The day i cried

The day i wished i wasn alive

I lost you

Now im in two

Pain and shame is part of the game

but to gain the same u must brake the chain

so my dark soul will get out of me

push 123 to set me free