Hello I made a story what I might make into a comic real soon and here it goes and also I'm going to write blogs every Friday/Saturday/Sunday (a.k.a days I don't have homework), on my story and it talks about blood and dieing so please don't say I didn't warn you. This is rated PG.

Story based on Daughter of Evil 


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Rin looked around thinking how to torture the world more; she smirked and gave a wicked laugh when she tripped her maid who was holding a glass.<o:p></o:p>

The maid groaned in pain with blood smeared on her dress/arm and legs, glass was all around her.<o:p></o:p>

Rin stopped laughing “You pitiful mess!” Rin scolded.<o:p></o:p>

“I’m s-so s-sorry p-princess” The maid stammered with tears falling from her eyes.<o:p></o:p>

“STOP CRYING OR I’LL HAVE YOUR HEAD ON MY SHELF!” Rin screamed angrily then pointed a finger at he shelf full of rotting heads/skulls/both. The maid stopped crying but whimpered and shooked as someone helped her up.<o:p></o:p>

“We gotta kill her” A servant murmured. A young man that had similar face to Rin glanced at the person that had spoken and turned red with rage.<o:p></o:p>

“WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THE QUEEN!?” He yelled giving a pause for the person he yelled at.<o:p></o:p>

“Uh…..-” he started.<o:p></o:p>

“NOTHING!!!!!! YOU KNOW NOTHING!!!!! SO SHUT UP AND STOP TALKING ABOUT HER!!!!!!!! I’M TELLING ON YOU AND I’LL BE LAUGHING MY HEAD OFF WHEN YOUR HEAD IS ON THAT SHELF” Len pointed at the shelf “I’LL BE THERE WHEN THE HANGING IS GOING ON, I BE THERE IF YOUR HEAD IS CUT OFF!!!!!! MY LOYALTY TO THE QUEEN IS TOO MUCH FOR YOU TO SAY SUCH RUDE THINGS ABOUT HER-HIGHNESS, IF MY HEAD WAS TO BE CUT OFF I’LL BE IN HER PLACE AND SHE’LL LIVE MY LIFE, AND IF SHE DIES I’LL LIVE HER LIFE AND DESTROY EVERYONE LIKE YOU!!!! YOU MAY THINK HER DEVIL I THINK HER ANGEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Len yelled.<o:p></o:p>

The Queen over heard this and went over.<o:p></o:p>

“What is your name?” The Queen asked to the servant.<o:p></o:p>

“Katsuo.” He said looking at the heads/skulls.<o:p></o:p>

The Queen noticed that he was looking at the heads “No, that’s not how you’ll die, no head chopping.” Said The Queen. The Queen looked at the young man.<o:p></o:p>

“Name and age.” The Queen ordered.<o:p></o:p>

“I’m Len and I’m 14.” Len said.  <o:p></o:p>

“Aren’t you a farm watcher?” Asked The Queen.<o:p></o:p>

“Yes ma’am.” Len answered.<o:p></o:p>

“Do you have a dagger for protection?” Asked The Queen.<o:p></o:p>

 Why is she asking me these questions? Len thought.<o:p></o:p>

“Can I borrow it, please?” The Queen asked.<o:p></o:p>

Katsuo gasped and started crying.<o:p></o:p>

Wow my head feels dizzy and confused, what can I do? What will I do? What will happen? Len thought.<o:p></o:p>

W-what’s going on? Len thought reaching for his pocket staring at the crying man STOP STUPID DON’T TOUCH THE DAGGER!!!! Len thought but couldn’t control himself.<o:p></o:p>

“Remember you said you where glad he was going to die” The Queen said.<o:p></o:p>

Len screamed and shut his eyes Len you’ll be a criminal Len thought STOP LEN PLEASE DON’T!!!!!! Len’s mind begged Len started to feel dizzier and confused when he gave the dagger to the queen. Len’s thoughts went crazy but he went totally blank after a scream and drips of some liquid.<o:p></o:p>

Len opened his eyes there was Katsuo laying dead, eyes wide opened blood pouring out.<o:p></o:p>

Len screamed and took the dagger from the body of Katsuo, Len stared at the dagger first, then Katsuo, and finally at the smirking queen.<o:p></o:p>

The whole castle saw what happened; Len saw all the horrified staring faces and passed out.<o:p></o:p>

Len was passed out for 2 weeks, whenever he woke up he was just in the same place he was when he passed out, his dreams where full of the image of Katsuo and whenever he saw someone when he woke up he would scream because he saw the dead face of Katsuo.<o:p></o:p>

When Len woke up fully he was starving and thirsty, Len stumbled over to the queen and begged for food and fell down, he had no strength left in him. TBC.......<o:p></o:p>

WeLoveAnime98
Amazing.. you are very creative.. You should make more stories on blogs. ^^
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Loony-Lazarus
Quote:Originally posted by: WeLoveAnime98Amazing.. you are very creative.. You should make more stories on blogs. ^^
thnx
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namicat101
Awsome story so far, keep it up. ^ ^
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Loony-Lazarus
Quote:Originally posted by: namicat101Awsome story so far, keep it up. ^ ^thanks
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