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    A beam of light had awoken my eyes. "Hello heaven..." I mumbled. "I am not heaven...get up you lazy slug!" I turned my body to the alarm clock facing left. It had read with a deep bold color :


8:29 pm

    "I'm-I'm...late!!" I sulked my body in to the bathroom. "Ugh..." I mumbled. I quickly shoved my tooth brush up my tiny mouth as I nocticed...there was no tooth paste! I hate my life! Grr...the tooth paste was heavy as a cement ball. I pressed the tooth paste and waited a minute for it to slowly squirt out.

   I was in such a rush that I had worn long un-matched leggings. On the right was striped holiday green and the other left was bright red polka dots. A fake fur jacket toppled over me ( passed by my mom when she was a child ), Horridious uggs ( again passed by my mom ).

    I slung my purple backpack around my back. "Later mom!" I hollered. "WHAT EVER!" She screamed. "BLAH!" I snapped. It was one of these days, when you're mom gets grumpy..AGAIN, when you forgot to do your home work, and when you're late...my life. I wish I lived in a fantasy world. My eyes focused on the road as I shifted my mass side to side while running to school! I stared at a rock. "Oooo... a rock!" I shouted.

I am NOT dumb, I just get easilly excited...

   I shook my head. My hands gripped on the large rock and reached it my pocket. " Well back to school..." I sighed. School was one block ahead and I almost reached it there..but- "Oof!" I yelled. The rock became larger every minute, I had nocticed the rock had became three times it's size. "What the...?!" I gasped finaly stopping. I scratched the rock as if it was real. The rock had became jet-black and opened a portal. It looked like a black hole.

   My finger had quickly sucked in the black portal. "Huh?!" I shouted. I was REALLY late for school, second period had started. But-the portal had interrupted my life, it was mysterious yet the aura of it made me want more! My body quickly became sucked in as soon my head. Was this my awesome death? I had shifted to another realm, another..dimension. All I saw were people dressed as peasants, paupers, markets, wheel barrows, and mythology items.

   "An-an-an alien!" One peasant cried. Another peasant grabbed a silver axe stuck in an oak log. "Destroy the alien!" He chuckled. Every one had grabbed a torch as they became closer and closer to me!

Was this another not so awesome death?!

Topics: the, adventure, life, story, of, Kurai, chapter, 1
DragonFang
I love it. Great writing, though stretching the chapters a tad wouldn't hurt.
  • January 17, 2011
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mimisky
Quote:Originally posted by: DragonFangI love it. Great writing, though stretching the chapters a tad wouldn't hurt.
Yeah I thought that making the story longer would help- thanks lol spider man agrees with you :D
  • January 17, 2011
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DragonFang
LOL
  • January 17, 2011
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DragonFang
I like it better extended. Nice work
  • January 17, 2011
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