Okay I write a lot! Here is a song I wrote called No More Pain:

 

Screams behind hatred,

Oh the pain I had today!

Why do the shadows lurk

On the night I had last night?

(Chorus 1)

I wish on a star.

I wish on the night sky.

Please, Bring me no more pain,

In the day to come.

(End chorus 1)

Why did I cry?

Didn't I know no one would hear me.

The pain I see,

Oh I wish...

(Chorus 2)

As I wish on the stars.

As I wish on the sky.

Oh please bring me no more pain!

Please let me live tomorrow in peace.

(End Chorus 2)

I feel so childish,

Playing up all night.

Please, some one, grant my wish.

Steal me from the pain I have today.

(Chorus 1)

I wish on a star.

I wish on the night sky.

Please, Bring me no more pain,

In the day to come.

(End Chorus 1)

The length of the days,

Getting longer and longer,

As I wait for someone,

Please save me! (x2)

I can't say I didn't try.

I can't say no one cared.

But all I wish

(Chorus 2)

As I wish on the stars.

As I wish on the sky.

Oh please bring me no more pain!

Please let me live tomorrow in peace.

(End chorus 2)

My smile is shown.

As I hide the pain inside.

Oh I hide the pain inside,

No one sees

The inner scars I hide,

As I beg for life to change.

As I beg for no more pain.

(Ending Chorus)

I beg every night,

As I wish apon the stars,

Oh Lord, help me!

Save me from my pain!

As I ask, I cry for someone,

Is there someone out there?

Can anyone save me?

(End ending chorus)

As I lie in wake,

I wait for you to save me. (x2)

okay, thats it! If you like it, let me know! :smile: If not... What would YOU change? I'm open to suggestion! :biggrin:

 

-Kriss OUT

Topics: Song, Music, Fallenhearts
blacknyellow878
its really good i luv it
  • March 17, 2011
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fallenhearts
Quote:Originally posted by: blacknyellow878 Thanks for the coment! smile
its really good i luv it
  • March 18, 2011
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