Okay I write a lot! Here is a song I wrote called No More Pain:
Screams behind hatred,
Oh the pain I had today!
Why do the shadows lurk
On the night I had last night?
(Chorus 1)
I wish on a star.
I wish on the night sky.
Please, Bring me no more pain,
In the day to come.
(End chorus 1)
Why did I cry?
Didn't I know no one would hear me.
The pain I see,
Oh I wish...
(Chorus 2)
As I wish on the stars.
As I wish on the sky.
Oh please bring me no more pain!
Please let me live tomorrow in peace.
(End Chorus 2)
I feel so childish,
Playing up all night.
Please, some one, grant my wish.
Steal me from the pain I have today.
(Chorus 1)
I wish on a star.
I wish on the night sky.
Please, Bring me no more pain,
In the day to come.
(End Chorus 1)
The length of the days,
Getting longer and longer,
As I wait for someone,
Please save me! (x2)
I can't say I didn't try.
I can't say no one cared.
But all I wish
(Chorus 2)
As I wish on the stars.
As I wish on the sky.
Oh please bring me no more pain!
Please let me live tomorrow in peace.
(End chorus 2)
My smile is shown.
As I hide the pain inside.
Oh I hide the pain inside,
No one sees
The inner scars I hide,
As I beg for life to change.
As I beg for no more pain.
(Ending Chorus)
I beg every night,
As I wish apon the stars,
Oh Lord, help me!
Save me from my pain!
As I ask, I cry for someone,
Is there someone out there?
Can anyone save me?
(End ending chorus)
As I lie in wake,
I wait for you to save me. (x2)
okay, thats it! If you like it, let me know! :smile: If not... What would YOU change? I'm open to suggestion! :biggrin:
-Kriss OUT
its really good i luv it