Ashfur trudged through the forest, crying. Clear tears poured to the ground. He had just gotten  dumped by Squirrelflight. Firestar walked up to him. "What's wrong?" He asked. Ashfur stared at the floor. "Squirrelflight dumped me," Then he flashed Firestar an angry gaze. "YOUR daughter."  Firestar sighed. "She is foolish. Ignore it." Then he looked at the poor, pathetic Ashfur. "Would you like to be the new deputy?" Ashfur looked at Firestar. "Your kidding?" He gasped. "No. I don't." He replied softly. "But, Brambleclaw is the deputy!" Ashfur spat the word Brambleclaw out as he replied. "I know..." Firestar whispered. "But he's not my kind of deputy.You are an ideal deputy." Ashfur stopped crying and his eyes sparkled. "Ok!" He exclaimed. "Let's go back to camp. I will announce your deputyship."


At camp:

Firestar and Ashfur sat on top of the High Rock. Firestar had called a meeting, and cats were muttering and whispering about why Ashfur was up there. Firestar raised his tail for silence. The talking died down. "My Clan," Firestar started. "I have chosen a new deputy." Yowling and protests broke before he was done talking. "SILENCE!" Firestar yowled. Instantly the yowls broke down. "I have chosen Ashfur as the deputy beacause I do not think that Brambleclaw is an ideal deputy." He lashed his tail. "So, if you do not accept this, Brambleclaw," He gazed at Brambleclaw. "Then you shall be exiled." Brambleclaw hissed. "I thought you trusted me!" Firestar just gazed on. "Why would you do this? I am not ok with it! Are you, Squirrelflight?" He looked at his mate. Squirrelflight said proudly, "I am ok with it!" Brambleclaw gasped. Then Squirrelflight added, "I love Ashfur." She looked at Ashfur lovingly, and Ashfur blushed and gasped. "You are now exiled Brambleclaw. I give my warriors permission, IF they find you, to kill you." He repeated the words that Bluestar had said to his father, Tigerstar, after he had attempted to kill Bluestar for leadership. Firestar felt, as always, that Brambleclaw was like that. "Ashfur!Ashfur!" The crowd of ThunderClan cats cheered. After that, they turned to Brambleclaw, hissing, and drove him out of ThunderClan. Ashfur got off of the High Rock, and Squirrelflight licked his cheek, and rubbed her tail under his chin. Ashfur's dream had come true; he had Squirrelflight as a mate, and was future leader of ThunderClan.

Oh, The Bliss!



This is just a fanatic!

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WARNING: Brambleclaw lovers, don't read. This is really offensive.
  • May 25, 2011
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