A poem... you'll like it if you've ever been in love and have been heartbroken. but still read if not.. because i want you opinion on it... i made it myself.. pleasse tell me what you think and its kinda long.. sorry Smile

and it doesnt have a title yet. literally JUST made it

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My love came down
It got knocked around
Heart falling
Falling to the ground

You no longer acknowledge me
You make it seem like we where nothing

You think I still care?

Well you made me realize its better to stare


Love is hard

Never said it wasn’t

Once your fond of them

They tear your heart out

And make it bend


Once you believe its real

They’ll make you feel safe and happy

Once you realize its safe to feel

They’ll leave you as if your nothing

And make you feel really crappy


They’ll make you seem worthless

And never speak to you again

Make it seem as if your the bad one

Make the pain seep in


While the pain in your heart sits till it can stand

Till you can grab a stronger hand

You still feel the love of them and you’ll never forget

Once you break a girls heart

Its going to be something he’ll regret


All the crying you made me do

All the pain he has put me through

I can become stronger

And hold onto grudges longer


You may go around doing the same to other girls

But I can’t help them any longer

You have been cheating on me

But does that make you any stronger?


Does it make you become a better man?

One to love

One to hold hands


Once you hurt the wrong girl

Your world will begin to twirl

Around and around

Until you hurl


Till you can finally see

Why Im so sick of you

I’m not the old little petty me

I realized your game

And I’m not the same


I’ll get what I always wanted

For me this is just a game

But as for you

It’ll be nothing but pure adrenaline and pain


Justice and freedom

My heart with begin to have a rhythm

It will stop its bleeding

And show its healing


Make a smile appear on my face

And wipe that cheap little grin right off of yours

Just something that should have been taking care of

For a long time

And for good

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thanks for reading! tell me what you think.. plz!


Yoko-The-Fox
I like it and that is exactly how i felt with my recent ex who i was so in love with. keep up the good work :D
  • May 9, 2012
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pkiera75
Quote:Originally posted by: Pokemonfan23good job! that's how im gonna feel when my girlfriend moves away!oh wow.. srry to hear shes moving... i no the feeling. trust me
  • May 9, 2012
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pkiera75
Quote:Originally posted by: Yoko-The-FoxI like it and that is exactly how i felt with my recent ex who i was so in love with. keep up the good work :D
thanks! ^_^ ohh, i see... :/
  • May 9, 2012
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Xxgirxxemo
omfg it like ur reading thru meh diary
  • June 10, 2012
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