I'm writing a story (more like a novel), called Angel's Wish. It's still kinda a work in progress but whatever.This is the first chapter, first part (I've made about 3 1/2 chapters so far).
The sun began its dip behind the mountains, splashing gold atop their peaks. From my vantage point on the tree branch I was lounging on, I could see the whole park -and beyond- quite clearly. That morning my friends had dropped by my house and dragged me over to the nearby park. We’ve been at the park for most of the day, and my friends below me still showed no sign of calling it a day. I’d been playing with them as well, but decided to climb up my favourite tree instead.
“Hey Crystabelle! Come back down and join us!” my friend Fawn called up to me. She and my other friend Arya had paused their game of tag and were looking up at me expectantly.
“No thanks, guys. It’s getting late anyway, and we’d have to stop playing soon. You guys can keep going. I’ll be fine up here,” I replied.
Fawn just grinned. “We can stay out until after dark. It’ll be more fun that way.”
“No way! Wolves come out at night, plus I don’t think my parents will let me stay out so late,” Arya said. Fawn just rolled her eyes and nodded. “ Are you sure you don’t want to join us?”
“I’ll be fine,” I said once again. I grinned and made shooing motions with my hand to assure them. They looked at each other, then back at me. Fawn finally conceded, “Suit yourself.” And they returned to chasing after each other.
The sun was now somewhat more than a semicircle of light. I cool breeze ruffled the leaves above and teased my hair. It felt good to feel a cool wind after all the summer heat. Suddenly I became drowsy. I shifted my position on the branch so that there was little chance of me falling off, then waited for sleep to overtake me.
Before I entered sleep I felt a stronger wind blast, coming at me with a sudden force, as if a large fan had been turned on right in front of me.